the original title gave too much away

20May09

wearing fragility
like borrowed clothes
fitting
she supposes
wanting to give
them back
clashing with
what she is selling/
hoping we’re buying

she wields the scars
like a weapon
protecting her
from the harmless
reclaiming the distance
she hates

she holds on
to the pain
fear and guilt
and disbelief
and pride
fueling
this

she lets the guard
come down
just enough
to be cruel

she misses
opportunities

she wants
in theory

she lies

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15 Responses to “the original title gave too much away”

  1. 1 Matt

    Tequila.

    making girls talk since 1902.

  2. She sounds like trouble, dude.

  3. 5 Amanda

    …and the replacement title hides too much.

  4. 7 Thrice

    one of the best…

  5. 9 JenBun

    So… um… what was the original title?

    I’m guessing it has something to do with Amy Adams. ;)

  6. 11 steph

    You still got it, baby!!

  7. 13 Kara

    I want to know the real title too.


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