word doodlepalooza2: day 4: Kaci Edition

11Oct09

Hi. Kaci was kind enough to share this piece with us today.  Still a couple days left for you to submit.

Laying there
Your chest
Rising, falling
Each breath
Takes you
Deeper
Further
Into Dreamland
Your face
Emotionless
As you
Dream
About fish, deer
Or dragons
Your hand
Instinctively
Or maybe not
Grips mine
Whenever
I intertwine
Our fingers
Watching you
Laying there
Drifting further into
Dreamland
Would you still love me
If I threw a kitten
Claws and teeth
And all
On you
To wake you up?

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3 Responses to “word doodlepalooza2: day 4: Kaci Edition”

  1. Is it creepy I think this is really sweet?

  2. 2 J

    Very good K.

  3. This is GREAT!


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